Terse clangs in a hurry, Terse thoughts incisive. Can you interpret as AfroSays?
Smoke and fire swimming in the air, floating over a sea of chaos
Tonight we sleep on a bed of destruction
Barbed wire, screams, rain and thunder
But it just might be a bullet to the head
But you ducked just in time
A bath of lead and mud
While we attack each other, they plot the war
A garden of trenches and orange blooms
All we have is this blood red moon
Your bones are weak with running, your blood is on the floor
We’ve lost count of violence, so much for keeping score
My guns are on the floor


What! What! This is perfect. I especially love the way you ended it.
Thanks Kitkat,
…and you are the first one to comment too
Wow. You amaze me more each day, partner. I love this. I do.
Smiley. A Real one.
You’re amazing too!
Errm, books of the same jacket…? **scratching head
What the hell? Who’s this guy? This is just errm.. WOW!
“I think i will go by bayonet, you backstabber”
#Ubertalent!
Thanks man.
Seen your twitter buzz, guessed you were a blogger, wasn’t sure. I’d be visiting soon.
I’m totally speechless, I won’t lie I’m not deep enough to totally understand this, but I think I get the gist. Amazing work, as always.
Loba,
If you get the gist, then you understand it. That is all that is necessary.
Thanks for reading and tweeting too, we really appreciate it!
u write well. u paint pictures with your words, and thats just amazing. good work.
Amazing is a big adjective. I’m giving a big thank you for that.
Bankole bankole bankole. How many times did I call you? This is good.
Thrice? (GRE reading has me scared of maths these days, everything seems to be something else than it seems.)
Did i get the call count?
Thanks again, for the kind comment
Mind blowing….. very vivid images painted with words…..I love.
Thanks Dee,
You’re always here every now and then and it means a lot to us.
Thanks!
That afro should be cheked..i think it’s sentient.it keeps saying the dopest ish to you
thumbs up man
7.99846578 out of 8.112536347
lol
I love this! It just flows in my mind, and I especially love the end
VINTAGE! Mo like!
Another lovely one from AfroSays. I like this, Banxman.
Haha. Perfectly describes me and my ex at a point in time. Story of my life.